I did not expect the demo to be helpful but it was so helpful omg. I feel reinvigorated about my project and am so excited to make it better based off of the feedback I recieved during my demo.

Feedback

• transition from perfection collage to colorful collage
  • confusing
  • loses the audience
• more words in perfection collage
  • overlay words to black → reverse and then rip up
• black space at the end
  • add in credits
    • cut out in magazine letters… (IF TIME)
    • made on after effects
  • music
  • special shouts
• end letter
  • make colorful?
  • spit out perfection (ripped up) and add in new
  • address the letter to myself
  • picture of myself is the stamp
• remove “the end”
  • growth is always continuing
  • “sincerely, Nancy”
  • “sincerely, your imperfect self”
  • “imperfect and proud”
  • lots of photos of my self and self portrarits
• build SLOW to FAST
  • slow → unsure of self
  • fast → confident, smooth

Ideas

• remake perfection collage
  • lay down
  • words
  • destroy
• transition between perfection and colorful
  • slow down
  • sketch in each color
  • each piece of the colorful collage moves in?
  • write in words related to the color and childhood innocence/fearless creating associate with each color
    • red → “red, cherry, love, fire, confident…”
  • have characters move around → interact with the words
  • zoom out to show all of the colors
• transition between colors and final
  • zoom out to show all of the colors

Plan

• [ ] add more words to perfection collage
• SO MANY
• each letter (not full words like “should”)
• “freak out”
• “right, wrong, right, wrong”
• “could’ve”
• “should’ve”