Check in with John
- I deserve an A because I have been working hard and making good progress based off of feedback from myself, john and others.
- I think about this project too much to get anything less than a B, lol 😊
- un-smooth transitions
- blowing away
- [ ] fix the first one (black → red) in after effects
- [ ] redo the last transition
- collage folds up
- goes back in envelope
- envelope goes away
- credit scene
- solidify the end of the film
- currently ends too fast
- [ ] “the end” magazine letters
- [ ] credits?
- [ ] pictures of cats?
- don’t get too attached to your work
- [ ] “be willing to take it behind the woodshed and beat the shit out of it” - john bacus
- [ ] watch old yeller?